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Ten Random Words Part One by ~ebonydelirium:iconebonydelirium:



Words to use: disseminate, incredulous, lithe, nonchalant, poise, saunter, quintessence, stipend, transcend, zealous.

Eva slipped her hands into the lithe gloves. She was finally ready to move forward with the incredulous task at hand. She sauntered over to the prisoner who was caged on the floor of the immaculate cell. She was very anal about the cleanliness of the cell.
"Do you have the stipend, you bastard?" Eva asked the prisoner. He was bound and gagged. "I didn't think so, pig." She replied to the prisoners zealous attempts at speech. While being nonchalant and poised, Eva brought the prisoner to his trembling feet.
"You must now transcend the limits of this world so I may obtain quintessence." Eva explained to the prisoner as she strapped him into a strange looking device.
"Have a nice death!" She exclaimed shortly before pulling the lever that promptly dismembered the prisoner.
"Now all that is left is to desseminate the remains. Then I will finally obtain quintessence." Eva said to no one but herself.
©2007-2009 ~ebonydelirium
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Author's Comments

This is something that :iconhaikukitty: came up with. Look through a dictionary and take 10 random words on 10 random pages. Then write something about it. This is what happened.
And I probably used quintessence wrong, so shoot me.

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:iconhaikukitty:
I love how you have taught me new words - I had to look up "quintessence" I think you have used it right. :D

Eva is one strong woman! You have conveyed a lot about who she is in very few words. That is a great gift.

Did it come easily for you when you had 10 words, or did it feel harder? So far I like the restriction of the ten words, it forces me to really use my imagination.

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:iconcrazyconfuzing:
Very cool, just one thing... you tend to repeat words and this gives it a bit of a "stuttered" feel. Try a few adjectives and the flow will improve.

EG:

She sauntered over to the prisoner who was caged on the floor of the immaculate cell. She was very anal about the cleanliness of the cell.

She sauntered over to the prisoner who was caged on the floor of the immaculate cell. She was very anal about the cleanliness of the dungeon.

"You must now transcend the limits of this world so I may obtain quintessence." Eva explained to the prisoner as she strapped him into a strange looking device.
"Have a nice death!" She exclaimed shortly before pulling the lever that promptly dismembered the prisoner.


"You must now transcend the limits of this world so I may obtain quintessence." Eva explained to her captive as she strapped him into a strange looking device.
"Have a nice death!" She exclaimed shortly before pulling the lever that promptly dismembered the prisoner.

Otherwise, really great. I'm loving this form of writing


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Who said that?
:iconebonydelirium:
Yeah, I tried using words that I either didn't know already, or rarely use. Made it a little harder, while strengthening my vocab!
In one aspect it was easy (helped me work through my writer's block) but at the same time, I did feel (and like!) the restriction of the words!

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I held a fallen star and it wept for me, dying
I feel the fallen stars encircle me now as they cry
Feeling surrounded so bored with mortality I decay
:iconebonydelirium:
Thanks alot! I realized I was repeating words, but seriously for the life of me, I couldn't think of anything to replace it with!
You should give this a try, it's a really great time!

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I held a fallen star and it wept for me, dying
I feel the fallen stars encircle me now as they cry
Feeling surrounded so bored with mortality I decay
:iconhaikukitty:
That is how I feel about it, I liked the restriction of it - and I try to throw a word or two in that is something I just learned or is so oddball that I never use it in real life.

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:iconebonydelirium:
Exactly! I'm so glad that you did this, and that I found it!

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I held a fallen star and it wept for me, dying
I feel the fallen stars encircle me now as they cry
Feeling surrounded so bored with mortality I decay
:iconhaikukitty:
Would you like to do some more?

If so, hit me with ten words, and I will give you ten more. :D

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:iconebonydelirium:
Cool beans, here are your ten words! :)
coagulate
demeanor
finite
oceanography
housewife
trapeze
zany
venom
halucination
desolate

I hope they're good ones!

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I held a fallen star and it wept for me, dying
I feel the fallen stars encircle me now as they cry
Feeling surrounded so bored with mortality I decay

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