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The dead of night.

A lonely chord
On a dusty guitar.

Laugter, Giggles.

Outside.

Always outside.
Never to penetrate
These decaying walls.

To venture outside
Outside of these morbid walls
Would be suicide.

Suicide of the mind and soul.

Outside.

Outside there are things
(Happiness, Love, Compassion)
Things that can not
Must not
Be discovered.

Not by the innocent child
That resides within
These four dreadful walls.
©2004-2009 ~ebonydelirium
:iconebonydelirium:

Author's Comments

This was definatly brought on by listening to Bright Eyes. This wasn't meant to turn out the way it did, but oh well. I actually wrote something! Yay for me.

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:iconsacrumrainstyormz:
Oh wow...I like this...A Lot...man really nice, most definately going into my favorites....nice job...go check out some of my poetry if you like...ehh...I think you'll like my Random Poems...well yeah...again great poem, keep up the good work! :clap:

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Perhaps I meant to hypnotize you with subliminal messagings, and inconsequential memories,

All in all to tie you around my finger, wrap you tightly, cut the circulation away, and kill the master’s power,

me
[link]
:iconebonydelirium:
Thank you muchly! I'll most definatly check out your poetry!

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I held a fallen star and it wept for me, dying
I feel the fallen stars encircle me now as they cry
Feeling surrounded so bored with mortality I decay
:iconsacrumrainstyormz:
Yay! I look forward to your comments. And since I have a bit 'o' time on me hands, I shall go check otu a few more of yours! Adieu!

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Perhaps I meant to hypnotize you with subliminal messagings, and inconsequential memories,

All in all to tie you around my finger, wrap you tightly, cut the circulation away, and kill the master’s power,

me
[link]
:iconmasterofphantasy:
I liked it... it give a feeling of trapped hopelessness. like you can't escape, and don't want to leave your safe little haven... I can relate.

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"People demand freedom of speech to make up for the freedom of thought which they avoid. "
- Soren Aabye Kierkegaard (1813-1855)

The old addage don't judge a book by it's cover has become obsolete. in todays world we would all rather be judged by our
:iconebonydelirium:
Aw, thank you! And thats definatly one of the many things I decided that it means...it means alot of stuff, weirdly enough.

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I held a fallen star and it wept for me, dying
I feel the fallen stars encircle me now as they cry
Feeling surrounded so bored with mortality I decay
:iconorophir:
Wow you did really well on this one
i like it very much
:iconebonydelirium:
Thank you so much!!

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I held a fallen star and it wept for me, dying
I feel the fallen stars encircle me now as they cry
Feeling surrounded so bored with mortality I decay
:iconaviance:
sounds so simple and obvious...but it isnt...i love the way you laid it out...it makes it seem so mysterious and so questioning.and like most your poetry...so emotional...tis very ace :D

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I'll wait until ive conquered this dreadfull planet...
:iconebonydelirium:
Aw, thank you! :hug:

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I held a fallen star and it wept for me, dying
I feel the fallen stars encircle me now as they cry
Feeling surrounded so bored with mortality I decay

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